.the.last.time.i.miss.you by noah-kh

.the.last.time.i.miss.you

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Added: Jun 06, 2004
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the blade was cold,
and the pain it brought was spreading
like the blood into the lands
into his flesh, his bones,
his heart.

when would it end,
the age of chaos..
after selling the world to satan
or praying to lucifer for wisdom?

and as he tried
to gaze into the distant skies.
through the tears, through the memories
reaching for air, looking for reality
he caught himself calling her name...

though unsure if it was spoken,
or was it just in his mind,
but it was there, the words.

"i'm sorry...
this, will be the last time i miss you...
and we'll be together forever then."

sempiternal.
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happy birthday to myself. 3june. oh the aging.

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Great Art!

Guest's picture

Ohmigosh, you're right, he didn't stab himself, someone else is holding the knife. But who is this person and what does it mean?

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*gulps*
This picture is amazing! He looks like he is wary af all those fights and contempt that he will die in a moment. But the look on his face also makes one want to cradle him and to tell him the world isn't as bad as he thinks it to be. This picture is able to imprint the whole turmoil of emotions onto the onlooker.
There's just one thing I have to ask: Maybe it's just me, but what about his second/left arm?

Guest's picture

Oh-my-god. It's absolutely amazing! But it's also so sad. The poem just brings it all together and makes it even better! I cannot say how much I love it! Only in my dreams can I make something like that.

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I don't know, it kind of looks to me like that's the handle of the blade - not another's hand. I could be wrong - it is a little ambigous there. It would be more melodramatic if he were killing himself, though.

In any case. This is a truly special picture you have here. Highly commendable work.

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Man you trully captured the feeling of a man who lost all, but whose last tought was of hope, hope of seeinghis love again. He is almost holding the hand of the killer as in thanking.
I am no artist at all, but man you really really touched me. And the poem... that I can see, I am a poet, you are gifted.

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Man you trully captured the feeling of a man who lost all, but whose last tought was of hope, hope of seeinghis love again. He is almost holding the hand of the killer as in thanking.
I am no artist at all, but man you really really touched me. And the poem... that I can see, I am a poet, you are gifted.

Guest's picture

OMG your artwork is just...breathe-taking! The details and colors and emotions.... O_o
Have you ever consider holding art lessons in singapore?

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If you'll notice, the man has one gloved/spiky hand over someone else's wrist... whom has stabbed him. Its not suicide. Awesome picture, though, for the record. ^.^

elneskog's picture

I aggree with the others...great capture of the emotion the painting is giving. stunning artwork

jenr8r's picture

Beautiful work Noah!

...and Happy B-day! Laughing out loud

malyce's picture

Such a sad story, and yet you portrayed the raw emotion in this piece. I didnt notice at first he stabbed himself until i read the insert below, the whole feel of warmth and sorrow in this artwork is breath-taking. This one truely captures the soul (Very well done)

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totally so beautiful, the man has so kissable face and lips heart heart heart emoticons here

Art at its best.