Artwork Description
My alternitive 1920's SciFi character 'Pinky' is doing a 'Lawence of Arabia' here. This watercolour image depicts her meeting with some agents in the desert.
This work is done on A1 size watercolour paper. The orriginal apears quite different due to the enormous size difference between this version and the actual image.
Comments
I take your point my good fellow, but I think you focus way too much on what you dislike. I really don't see much of a problem with it, but that's probably just me. The care is my favourite part of this image.
i don't like the way that camel head overlaps the arch it's very weird and disracting, also look at the way the riding character's whip, or whatever it is is ends right where the arch begins, and the arch seems to bend to the shape of the back of the camels neck and the camel and the arch are way too similar in value for beeing so far away from each other. none of this looks intentional, and it makes your work look slopy. This is the kind of stuff you should have dealt with in your composition beafore you started rendering. tsk, tsk.
Ah, which agent is this one hm? And isn't having a driver a resk to secrisy?
Nice image! Water colors hm? Man, I would never have gressed, looks like paint!