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bdartstudio
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i have addressed the wrist issue... hadnt finshed blending it... will post new version later tonight,.... just got home.. taught 7th graders today.. am pooped out!
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bdartstudio
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using my hand as ref.... so fingers are a bit stubby... could use help fixing that part 
any one up for a redline? only been working on arm that is bent...
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bdartstudio
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I changed the way the hair looked a little. I didnt like how it kinda obscured the hand. I think its much better...
THough I am not sure I like the hand. Its not very elegant in the fingers... I wish I hand long fingers... It would make it eaiser for me.. but oh well.. we use what were given 
So any comments?
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Anatomy looks good to me. I think the fingers would indeed look better a bit more slender, hoewever it is not wrong anatomically I think.
Maybe soften the folds between the fingerparts a bit maybe, I think that also applies to the stubby look.
Lovely piece!
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bdartstudio
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| Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 6:37 pm Post subject: |
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So you think soffening the creases wil help...
I'll give it a try!
So happy to hear the anatomy is ok.. !!! woohoo!
Definetly glad you like it too!
Will work on it when have some time...
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bdartstudio
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| Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:09 pm Post subject: |
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Worked on hard a bit tried to soften creases as suggested.. also added the object shes holding.
Added a few more fishes...
added a bit more corel...
attempted to indicate biolumences(sp?) in background of others.. not so sure bout it...
Need to finish other hand and work on hair a bit more i think... face still seems odd to me..
Paintovers/crits welcome and needed at this point...
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| Quote: | I see a few problems with this image. One is the face, it really is not working, maybe try to define better her jawline? And from this angle the face looks like if it had a flat structure. The line where the tail meets the flesh looks very smudgy, I would refine that further.
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Additionally I think that the seaweed? belt looks pasted since it is not casting shadows on her.
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bdartstudio
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I havent gotten to those parts yet... the seaweed isnot quite done... still just a rough "outline" along with the waist
I will work on the face a bit tomorrow...
as for the rest?
Look ok?
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