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Shialyn Vhaunil, drow Sword Dancer of Eilistraee

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frpnavarro's picture
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Hello! I received an "Unrefined/Lack of Detail" verdict with this piece. Though I probably won't be making any correction or updates on it, I would like to hear your feedback. Thanks in advance.

Shialyn Vhanil

frpnavarro's picture
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Wow. I never realized how desolate this place is nowadays. I hope things get better.

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Hey... I dunno if you read this, but id like the forum to get back together too.

I guess maybe you could add skin pores? thats all I can think of, it looks a little smooth.
Actually studying it, it looks micro facet, all I can suggest is making the poors a little grittier than just complete velvet like they are now.

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Hi... I think its a nice picture with some good details. I think all you need to do is make here wrists and hands a little more clear. Right now they are very dark. That should do it.

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I was just thinking about how her hands could use some more detail; the fingers don't look quite right, hard to say as they're very dark against a dark background. That might be it?

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